This is where you post anything you have written if you want to show and see how well you've done and also have people help you fix it.
1. Do not say that the person's story is horrible. Tell them what is wrong with it and try to find a way to help them fix it.
2. If the story is not PG-13, please don't post it here because we may have little kids joining to roleplay on the G, PG, or PG-13 rated things and they may come to see how people write or draw.
3. Enjoy showing your work and have fun on my forum.